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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Please review the following sentences.

Our company will be having an Annual Dinner on 2nd October 2010.

In conjunction with this annual event, it will be a great pleasure if your esteemed company could sponsor gift for the lucky draw session.
  

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Our company will be having an (its) Annual Dinner on 2nd October 2010. In conjunction with this annual event, we would appreciate it very much if it will be a great pleasure if your esteemed company would could sponsor a gift for the lucky draw session.

  • Our company will be having an (its) Annual Dinner on 2nd October 2010.
  • In conjunction with this annual event, we would appreciate it very much if it will be a great pleasure if your esteemed company would could sponsor a gift for the lucky draw session.
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Our company will be having an (its) Annual Dinner on 2nd October 2010.
In conjunction with this annual event, we would appreciate it very much if it will be a great pleasure if your esteemed company would could sponsor a gift for the lucky draw session.

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