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Kps Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing
Please review the follow up email on cv
I request you to review the below email for grammatical errors and formatting. Please help me out asap.
Hi,
I’m following up in reference to my email on 01, July. As mentioned, I am a MBA graduate from 2014 with 3 years of experience in Accenture in Mortgage domain supporting financial claims and audit services. I have implemented process improvement ideas, involved in training and mentoring activities.
I am interested to work in XYZ and I look forward to the opportunity to meet you and discuss further.
Thanks for your review and consideration. Please let me if you need any information and I will provide the same immediately.
Sincerely,
Hi,
I’m following up in reference to my email on 01, July. As mentioned, I am a MBA graduate from 2014 with 3 years of experience in Accenture in Mortgage domain supporting financial claims and audit services. I have implemented process improvement ideas, involved in training and mentoring activities.
I am interested to work in XYZ and I look forward to the opportunity to meet you and discuss further.
Thanks for your review and consideration. Please let me if you need any information and I will provide the same immediately.
Sincerely,
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Dear Mr (Ms) [surname], I am f ollowing up on my email of July 1st. As I mentioned, I am a 2014 MBA graduate with 3 years of experience at Accenture mortgage services, supporting financial claims and audit services. I have implemented process improvements and been involved in training and mentoring activities.
- Dear Mr (Ms) [surname], I am f ollowing up on my email of July 1st.
- As I mentioned, I am a 2014 MBA graduate with 3 years of experience at Accenture mortgage services, supporting financial claims and audit services.
- I have implemented process improvements and been involved in training and mentoring activities.
- I am interested in working for XYZ , and I am looking forward to the opportunity to meet you and discuss this possibility further.
- Thank you very much for your time and consideration.
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Dear Mr (Ms) [surname],
I am following up on my email of July 1st. As I mentioned, I am a 2014 MBA graduate with 3 years of experience at Accenture mortgage services, supporting financial claims and audit services. I have implemented process improvements and been involved in training and mentoring activities.
I am following up on my email of July 1st. As I mentioned, I am a 2014 MBA graduate with 3 years of experience at Accenture mortgage services, supporting financial claims and audit services. I have implemented process improvements and been involved in training and mentoring activities.
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Thank you sir. I need few clarifications from you.
1. Can we use dear for formal letter and email, in the case where I do not know him personally?
2. Can I use July 20th or 20th July in the above sentence?
3. Is it advisable to use sincerely yours or yours sincerely in email?
Once again thanks for your help...
1. Can we use dear for formal letter and email, in the case where I do not know him personally?
2. Can I use July 20th or 20th July in the above sentence?
3. Is it advisable to use sincerely yours or yours sincerely in email?
Once again thanks for your help...
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kps. Can we use dear for formal letter and email, in the case where I do not know him personally?It seems to be a job application. You should remain formal throughout the process.
kps2. Can I use July 20th or 20th July in the above sentence?I strongly suggest the first.
kps3. Is it advisable to use
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