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The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram illustrates the process of recycling organic waste to make garden compost. Overall, there are five main stages to produce fertilizer.
At the first stage, a 2 meters plastic container with air vents on each side is required. Afterward, putting waste food in the container until it accounts for 15 cm of the container's bottom, followed by 15 cm of glass and some newspaper. Subsequently, nitrogen and water are poured into the container, but only when the climate is hot can the nitrogen and water mixture be added to the container.
Heat starts to comes out of the air vents after the container is closed. Finally, after six months, compost is created and ready to utile.

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The diagram illustrates the process of recycling organic waste to make garden compost. (new paragraph) Overall, there are five main stages to produce fertilizer. (You did not make it clear to the reader that compost can be used as a fertilizer.)
At the first stage, a 2 meters (incorrect size) plastic container with air vents on each side is required. Afterward, putting (wrong form) waste food in the container until it accounts for 15 cm of the container's bottom, (awkward, unnatural ) followed by 15 cm of glass (wrong word) and some newspaper. Subsequently, nitrogen and water are poured into the container, but only when the climate is hot can the nitrogen and water mixture be added to the container. (That is not accurate. The nitrogen is added all the time; the water is added only in hot weather.)

( You started with the first stage, but did not give numbers to the other four stages.)
Heat starts to comes out of the air vents after the container is closed. Finally, after six months, compost is created and ready to utile. (wrong word)

Model essay (172 words)

The diagram illustrates the process of recycling organic waste such as uneaten food, grass clippings, dry leaves and other similar material to make compost, which is a good fertilizer for a garden.

Overall, there are five main steps to producing compost. First, obtain a large plastic container with a cover. The recommended size is two cubic meters. Cut air vents into all sides so that there will be good air circulation throughout the entire container. Second, layer the waste food on the bottom of the container to a depth of about 15 cm. On top of that, add grass clippings for a total depth of about 30 cm. Cover everything with pages of newspaper. Third, add nitrogen granules to the container. If the weather is hot, also add water. Fourth, secure the cover on the container and let the decomposition process work for six months. Hot vapour will be observed coming out of the air vents during this time. Finally, open the container and use the fertilizer for the vegetable or flower garden.

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