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The table compares data on the proportion of people who rode bicycles in a town by age groups in 2011.

Overall, The proportion of females who rode bicycle was relatively higher than that of male. The highest percentage of females and males who cycled fell into the 0-9 age bracket.

more than half of females and males who are in the 0-9 age group rode bicycle. However, in the 10-17 years old group, only 24,6% male cycled, compared to 42,2% of its counter gender.

The proportion of female who are aged 18-39 years old and 40-59 years old was 17,1% and 12,3% respectively, whereas that of males was 9,7% for the former age group and 8.0% for the latter age group. Finally, there was a slight rise in the number of females and males who rode bicycles in the elderly age bracket, which is over 60 years old group , 18.5% for female and 13.2% for male.