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All people have hopes and desires for the future. What hope or desire you want most to come true?

Write at least 100 words.

My answer:

That is an interesting question for me. I feel like wide various desires. One of the most significant of them is cutting off the motors’ sound. It is clear that the electric motors are using widely in industrial machines and vehicles. When you go in the street or in a factory, these motors’ sound is very noisy and are on our nerves. Sometimes you need to talk loudly in these situations and as a matter of fact, it’s very dangerous to our health. Some people believe that we can get used to the noise and some are not bothered by it at all. While, psychologists say it’ll have a bad effect on our audition and mentality once and for all. I think this desire is cut and dried and it certainly comes true. One day we will give up it.