Please review my Writing task 2

Topic: In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why in this the case?
What can be done about this problem?

My writing:
Due to radical developments in many field such as technology, economy, more and more progress have been recorded in agriculture. Nevertheless, many people in the world are still starving. This paper will attempt to discuss the reasons why as well as recommend some of the solutions can be taken.

To start with, one significant factor lead to the starvation is over-population. According to United Nations, world population in 2022 is about 8 billions, which rises 200 millons people compared to 2020. It is undeniable that the number increases swiftly. This leads to the fact that ration is can not be catered timely and adequately for all people in the world. One way can be taken to solve this problem is family planning. People around the world, especially in developing and undeveloping countries, should be educated to gian awareness of the importance os birth-rate affect.

In addition, owing to the inadequate earnings in many households, starvation in continuously increasing. International Labour Organization has stated that 73 millions people in the world are unemployed. Contributing to this issue may be the rapid progess in technological devices that replaces human, for instance, reception robots in ample hotels, restaurants. Government should publish reasoning policies to assist more people gain jobs. Workers also need to be adaptive and update technology to meet the needs of 4.0 era and make advances in work, for example, using online platform in teaching to gain more students.

By way of conclusion, over population and poverty play important roles in the situation that many people in the world still go hungry. Inhabitants should be enlighted as to these problems and government ought to lay down suitable methods to solve them.