Please review my writing task 2

Even though doctors worldwide agree that fast food is bad for people’s health, more and more people are eating it.

Why are more people eating fast food?

What problems may arise in future?

The dramatic consumption of junk foods is increasing unprecedently to the point of engaging doctors and health sectors' minds. however, the factors of this worldwide epidemy are evidential and thus require attention and capitalization in order to change the future awaiting us. nowadays thanks to the upward working hours as well as living expenses families especially working-class ones are confronted with a vexing situation. nourishing foods or gourmet meals are time-consuming and high in price such luxuries can not be afforded more often than not. on the other hand, fast foods are economic, quick, and easy to fill us up. being high in salt, loaded with a noticeable amount of trans fat as well as carbohydrates with little to no fiber these ingredients are poised to take us and our digestive system down. Eating disorders, obesity, coronary diseases in addition to a bloodstream filled with LDL are some functions of eating these ready foods. children make up a large proportion of the world's populationand also future .whilst they are in their formative years they get effortlessly contented with anything edible and delicious. the initial choice in many instances is fast food. Therefore the child is used to an unbalanced diet and has a great potential for a poor immune and digestive system. not to mention the irregular secrete of hormones which results in abnormalcy in the nervous system. the junk food disadvantages overweight the dissonances caused by consuming them. they have been an outlet of hope for people with poor socio-economic backgrounds besides being enjoyable. intaking them under control and homemade on the whole is more imaginable rather than putting an end to them. all in all, they are clearly unfit for human consumption, we all are better off without them.