Please Review My Writing Task 2!

Topic: Nowadays computer education is compulsory for your learners in most schools. Do you think this is necessary or will children acquire these skills naturally from their daily interaction with technology everywhere? Provide your opinion and use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Computer learning is among the most important subjects for students. As a matter of facts, this topic is considered mandatory in most schools in the world. The necessities of computer educating and some points of view about daily interaction with technology will be stated in this essay.

Due to the development of technology, human life is changing rapidly. To compete wit the dramatic growth of automation, people should provide themselves with fulfilled knowledge. I highly recommend that every schools serve computer education as a compulsory subject for two reasons. Firstly, computer learning is able to expand student's insight in technology. For instance, until the year 2020, almost every cities in Vietnam has an average of 40% of learners who are taught information technology so that young-aged students can have interest in investing the endless functions of computers. Secondly, most of the students can also have access to online teaching and learning applications in order not to pause studying through the pandemic. This concept is convenient since it has the ability to reach to remote areas.

On the other hand, students from all ages can easily reach out for technology devices and learn computer skills themselves. This should not be forbiddened, however, parents must take control of their children's behaviour because the network may contain inappropriate contents.

In conclusion, picking up knowledge of conputer is crucial. New generation must enrich themselves by advancing their recognition.

(I'm a fresher, please review my writing)