Please review My Writing Task 1. Thank you very much

Please review My Writing Task 1

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The mixed chart demonstrates the police budget of an area in Britain in 2017 and 2018. There are two figures, one is the table that shows the sources of money came from, the other charts compare how much money was used for particular purposes. The accounting unit is by million euros.

Overall, money came from national government, local taxes, and other sources such as grants, but the highest contribution was from the national government. The money was taken for salaries of officers and staff, technology, buildings and transport. In general, the budget for salaries was the highest.

It is obvious to see that the national government was the official source in both 2017 and 2018. However, there was a noticeable in the number of money that in 2018, locals paid tax fees much higher nearly eleven million (102.3) than in 2017. Compared to other sources, it was lower by approximately three times. In total, the budget in 2017 was 304.7 million and in 2018 the number was 318.6 million.

The budget was mainly taken for salaries, indeed, one-fourth of the total would be paid for officers and staff in 2017, compared to 2018, the paid salaries were just 69 percent of the total. In terms of buildings and sports, it remained the 17% of payment both in 2017 and 2018. The remaining payment for technology in 2017 and 2018 respectively was 8% and 14%.