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The two illustrations describe the changes and developments in the facilities of an island for tourism.

As exhibited in the maps, more accommodations and other buildings have been constructed in the middle of the area. In the outside part, they also built a pier and added some surrounding boats.

Moving to a more detailed analysis, numerous houses with circle footpaths have been added to fulfill the empty land in both Westside and Northside. In the center, architects built a reception which was inside a round vehicle traffic leading to the restaurant in the North and the pier in the South. Besides,a number of plants and trees were still remained in their previous places. In the ocean, beach also has a path to go in and been upgraded into a place for swimming to attract more people. On the other side, they purchased for more boats and placed a pier for tourist to access the area.