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Task 1: The line graph illustrates the proportion of total expenditure in a certain European country between 1960 and 2000.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph compares the percentage of spending on five different categories in a particular country from 1960 to 2000.

Overall, the amount of most money was spent on Food, while the figure for Fuel/Energy was the lowest. The expenditure witnessed a downward trend on 4 categories namely ( Food, Leisure, Clothing, Fuel/Energy), whereas the figure for Transport witnessed an upward trend.

A the beginning, Food accounted for the most percentage of total expenditure at nearly 33% then it dropped rapidly to under 15% in the given period. By contrast, the amount of budget spent on Transport rose slightly from under 10% in 1960 to about 14% and became the highest in the last year.

Regarding Leisure, the figure for that declined gradually from nearly 19% to 11% throughout the given period. While the amount of spending on Clothing and Fuel/Energy witnessed a similar trend decreased from 10% to 5% and 6% to 4% respectively from 1960 to 2000.

  

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