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The given pie charts provide information on the global consumption, production, and profit distribution of coffee-related businesses across the world.


As it is represented in the pie charts while Japan is the third-largest consumer of coffee by 8% it is noteworthy, that on the other hand, is the third-largest producer of coffee as well. 18%of global production of coffee takes place in japan surpassing Vietnam with 16%and being below Indonesia which harvest 22% of consumed coffee .what comes as a surprise is that although south Africa by 44% is the significant source of coffee around the world, the main consumers of coffee are Europeans and Americans by 41% and 39% respectively. rest of the world hardly intake 12%of the provided coffee.

In the case of profit distribution, the marketplace is dominated by delivery taking the major portion of 51 %under its control. accordingly, the retailers' share is approximately a quarter, and 15% of the total goes to the producers whilst exporters get merely 10% of the entire income.