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The group bar chart gives out the numbers of age from the interviews asking 1000 adolescents about what age they believe the young people can get certain rights and be held accountable.
As can be seen, across a range of five countries, namely America, Britain, Mexico, Japan, and Egypt, the highest points of the age belong to Japan, in which they think that the youth should be allowed to marry when they are 22. On the other hand, the USA is the most strict nation when they reckon that adolescents must be obliged for their criminal responsibility from the age of 12 (approximately).
However, with three remains, the UK, Mexico, and Egypt are countries that have the average numbers. They said that the obligation for criminal responsibility should begin at above 14 years old. In addition, they can be permitted for voting when they are enough 16 and married at the same age (for Mexico and Egypt).
Overall, each country is indicated to have discrepant expectations of age for adolescents to approach their rights and responsibilities according to the perspective of interviewees.

  

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) from the interviews asking 1000 adolescents about what age they believe the young people can get certain rights and be held accountable. (You did not mention the countries or the different categories of responsibilities. You have to put this in the figure description.

  • ) from the interviews asking 1000 adolescents about what age they believe the young people can get certain rights and be held accountable.
  • (You did not mention the countries or the different categories of responsibilities.
  • You have to put this in the figure description.
  • ) As can be seen, across a range of five countries, (That does not make sense.
  • ) namely America, Britain, Mexico, Japan, and Egypt, the highest points of the age (That makes no sense at all) belong to Japan, in which they think that the youth should be allowed to marry when they are 22.
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The group bar chart gives out (not a good verb choice) the numbers of age (wrong expression - the scale on the Y-axis is age in years.) from the interviews asking 1000 adolescents about what age they believe the young people can get certain rights and be held accountable. (

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