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Trần Văn Anh Posted 5 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please review my writing task 1

Please review my writing task 1. Thank you so much!!!

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The chart provides information about various kinds of birds observed in Woodchuck county in two seasons (winter and summer) of the year.

Overall, bird watchers can watch eight different species of birds in Woodchuck. There are three distinct species (cardinals, crows, and woodpeckers) that can be observed in both summer and winter. One and four kinds of birds can only be seen in the winter and summer respectively.

In the winter, juncos are the only species that can be observed. Perhaps it migrates to farther north in the summer for its breeding season. The three remaining are cardinals, crows, and woodpeckers. They might not be migratory birds because they can be observed in both seasons. Woodchuck must be their habitat. They live here and can endure the cold conditions in the winter season.

In the summer, there are seven species that appear in Woodchuck. Four of them are bluebirds, mockingbirds, orioles, vireos. They must be migratory birds. They migrate to Woodchuck during the warm season for breeding and leave for warmer weather in the winter season.

  

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This is not a good practice test for IELTS Task 1. The actual test has figures with much more information to write about. Using a bad practice test like this one is like trying to learn to be a top football player with a deflated ball.

— AlpheccaStars

  • This is not a good practice test for IELTS Task 1.
  • The actual test has figures with much more information to write about.
  • Using a bad practice test like this one is like trying to learn to be a top football player with a deflated ball.
  • The chart (This is actually a table with three columns, so name it a "table") provides information about (vague.
  • ) table lists eight bird species and in which season (summer or winter) they are resident various kinds of birds observed in Woodchuck C ounty in two seasons (winter and summer) of the yea r.
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This is not a good practice test for IELTS Task 1. The actual test has figures with much more information to write about.

Using a bad practice test like this one is like trying to learn to be a top football player with a deflated ball.

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