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The chart provides information about various kinds of birds observed in Woodchuck county in two seasons (winter and summer) of the year.
Overall, bird watchers can watch eight different species of birds in Woodchuck. There are three distinct species (cardinals, crows, and woodpeckers) that can be observed in both summer and winter. One and four kinds of birds can only be seen in the winter and summer respectively.
In the winter, juncos are the only species that can be observed. Perhaps it migrates to farther north in the summer for its breeding season. The three remaining are cardinals, crows, and woodpeckers. They might not be migratory birds because they can be observed in both seasons. Woodchuck must be their habitat. They live here and can endure the cold condition in the winter season.
In the summer, there are seven species appear in Woodchuck. Four of them are bluebirds, mockingbirds, orioles, vireos. They must be migratory birds. They migrate to Woodchuck during the warm season for breeding and leave for warmer weather in the winter season.
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