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Lê Thị Thanh Trúc Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please review my writing task 1.

The table compares the number of five kinds of vehicles which were registered in Australia in three different years.

Overall, there was a gradual increase in the number of five differences types of vehicles registered in all three years (2010, 2012 and 2014). It is also noticeable that, while the change of motorcycles registered accounted for the highest percentage, the figure for passenger vehices registered was highest during the period shown.

In 2010, while about 11.8 million passenger vehicles were registered, the figure for passenger vehicles was considerably lower, at only 2.3 million in the same year. Over the following four years, there was a slight rise in the number of the passenger vehicles registered by 10.2 % around 12 million, whereas the figure with regard to commercial ones rose only 0.4 million by 17.4%.

Turning to the remaining types of others, we can see that the highest proportion was seen in motorcycles by 30.8% from 5.4 million to 7.9 million in 2014. During the same period, the numbers for heavy trucks and light trucks also climbed by 8.3% and 23.5% respectively.

  

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I'm so sorry for my mistakes. This is the first time I took part in this forum, so i didn't know where to post my writing task 1.

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