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The picture illustrates the process of collection weather information of Autralian Bureau of Meteorology to make forecasts.
Overall, it is clear that there are 4 distinct stages in the process, from the initial collection of information about the weather to the eventual production of broadcast to the public.
At the first and second stages of the process, the information is collected and analysed from 3 various sources: satellite, radar and drifting buoy. Firstly, incoming information from satellite is picked and presented for analysis as a satellite photo. Secondly, information can be received by radar and presented on a radar screen or synoptic chart. Finally, incoming information is passed by drifting buoy and analysed from a synoptic chart.
Looking at the third stage of this process, this amount of data tranfer into the computer which prepares the broadcast. Eventually, this information is broadcasted throughout 3 devices: TV newsreader, radio and recorded announcement.
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The diagram or flow chart seems to be missing. -> process of collecting.... by the Australian Bureau....
- The diagram or flow chart seems to be missing.
- -> process of collecting....
- by the Australian Bureau....
- in order to make /compile....
- Most style guides suggest writing out one-word numbers in full: -> four distinct stages.
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The diagram or flow chart seems to be missing.
-> process of collecting.... by the Australian Bureau.... in order to make /compile....
Most style guides suggest writing out one-word numbers in full: -> four distinct stages.
In the first and second stages...
-> from three (separate) sources
-> is picked up
-> information may be r
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Other students do not have problems attaching an image. I have asked you three or four times to do this.
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