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TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

AnswerEthanol fuel is a popular and common fuel that many people all over the world now are using, so in this writing, I will tell you about how ethanol fuel is produced. To make ethanol fuel, first, we need corn. Then, store and mill it. After that, we have to cook it for 4 hours with water. When we have already cooked the corn, let's fermenting it for 2 days. Next, we separating the corn into the liquid, then purifying Ethanol for 5 hours. The next step is storing - like the first step. Finally, we transport the Ethanol. That's all we have to do to produce Ethanol fuel from corn.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.

AnswerSport is really important in our life, it helps us become healthy and it is also a pleasant kind of entertainment, so many people want to play sport like their job, but there is a big question in our mind : What is the most important element for success in sport ? Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, other people think that mental strength is the most important, but what is the correct answer ? In my opinion, both of them are important. If you are a strong, healthy and powerful person with good physical strength, you might play sport easily and win some competitions. However, mental strength is also really essential. You know, everyone has their successful time, but they still might become a loser in their job, love and life. When you have your own power, your skill in playing sport, you can win, but not all the time. And this is the time for the brighten of mental strength. When you lose, of course, you will feel sad, disappointed and want to give up, but wait ! If you have strong mental strength, strong mind, you will not give up, you will go ahead without any afraid and scare, you try hard, then you win yourself, win the competitions and stand in the road fame. For success in sport, you need both physical and mental strength. A person have told me this : " If you walk in a 'rose' road that leads you to the success, you will still be hurt by the rose thorns". In conclusion, I believe that if you have mental, physical strength and also knowledge, you can be successful in every fields, not only sport.