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Cheryl03 Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Topic: You're arrived at your holiday house by the sea. Write an email to your friend Jack, telling him what food, clothes and household such as soap that you're brought already, and what things he should bring when he joins you tomorrow.

My paragraph:

Dear Jack,

My family arrived to our holiday house, which located near the Vong Nguyet Sea in Vung Tau. The atmosphere here is very fresh and cool. It's been a long time since our last vacation, so we spent a few hours cleaning up the house a bit. My family are happy to know you are coming to join us tomorrow. We are planning to have a sea food barbecue in our garden to welcome you. My parents have prepared something for you, such as soap, toothpaste, bath towel..., so you do not need to bring them here. I also brought some snack and beverage and we can use them when we go sightseeing in some places. You just need to bring your clothes and toothbrush. It is hard to find convenience stores here, so do not forget your toothbrush. And remember bringing your binocular. There are many beautiful scenes around our house. We can see them from our windows by it.

We are looking forward to seeing you tomorrow.

Cheryl.

  

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Dear Jack, My family arrived to at our holiday house, which located near the Vong Nguyet Sea in Vung Tau. The atmosphere here is very fresh and cool. It's been a long time since our last vacation, so we spent a few hours cleaning up the house a bit.

  • Dear Jack, My family arrived to at our holiday house, which located near the Vong Nguyet Sea in Vung Tau.
  • The atmosphere here is very fresh and cool.
  • It's been a long time since our last vacation, so we spent a few hours cleaning up the house a bit.
  • My family are happy to know you are coming to join us tomorrow.
  • We are planning to have a seafood sea food barbecue in our garden to welcome you.
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Dear Jack,

My family arrived to at our holiday house, which located near the Vong Nguyet Sea in Vung Tau. The atmosphere here is very fresh and cool. It's been a long time since our last vacation, so we spent a few hours cleaning up the house a bit. My family are happy to know you are coming to join us tomorrow. We are plan

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