Please review my transcription

Dear Teachers,

I transcribed the first part of ‘One Fine Day’, a radio program.

I would appreciate it if you could review my transcription after listening to the audio in the link below:

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https://goo.gl/y2QoaA

I think everyone has had that one friend that's cool. You know the one who's always seemed playing and never once seen studying and yet when the grades come out, he's always at the top, leaving everyone wondering what is he a genius? But I think most of the times, the truth was that he was just never seen putting in the work. It's easiest to be envious of what little we can see, but usually what we see is just the tip of an iceberg when you look into how people got to where they are, we learned that there's little to be envious about. The hardships, the hard work, the persistence and effort. Perhaps what we really should focus on it is the process and not the result - like how Monday through Thursday was an arduous process and Friday is result that we've been waiting for. I'm Lina part and this is one fine day.

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https://drive.google.com/open?id=1cOXBSj68jLJhsvCVKGbj3mTbsryyC0Ec

Everyone tackles their problems in different ways. Take for example dealing with stress. Some people say they eat their stress away, while others say a good night sleep does the trick. Some people turn to Fitness, going hiking or working out harder than ever in order to get rid of that stress. When facing a problem, it is indeed important to solve the problem as soon as possible. But at the same time, I think how you solve the problem is just as important. Sometimes if problems are unhandled right, ***** **** shortcuts are taken, well, while the initial problem might get solved, one My have unwittingly started a whole new problem, starting this vicious circle, no? One bad choice leading to the next one then the next one. Over starting a whole new week today, so I hope you all become the week on the right foot in good spirits that hopefully leading to the next **** **** the next good day. I'm Lina part and this is one fine day.

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I hope to get your kind feedback regarding any punctuation, typos or anything else.

Thanks and best regards,

David Kim