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Direction: Respond to the email as a new member of the sports and fitness club. In your email, ask THREE questions
Dear Mr. Phyllis:
I am very happy to be a new member of City Sports and Fitness Club. I’d like to ask you a few questions about your club. First, I am interested in badminton for a long time but I don’t know how to play it. Do you have any classes for beginners on Saturday or Sunday? Next, although I am good at playing tennis, I would like to develop my ability. How many times a week does the tennis field open? Finally, do you know any sports store near the club so that I can stop by and buy a new tennis racket? My racket is very old now. I appreciate your help
Regard,
Phoenix Nguyen
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Dear Phyllis : (This is a woman's name in English culture) I am very happy to be a new member of City Sports and Fitness Club. I’d like to ask you a few questions about your club. First, I am interested <<< wrong tense - what tense deals with the past up until now?
- Dear Phyllis : (This is a woman's name in English culture) I am very happy to be a new member of City Sports and Fitness Club.
- I’d like to ask you a few questions about your club.
- First, I am interested <<< wrong tense - what tense deals with the past up until now?
- in badminton for a long time but I don’t know how to play it.
- Do you have any classes for beginners on Saturday or Sunday?
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Dear Phyllis: (This is a woman's name in English culture)
I am very happy to be a new member of City Sports and Fitness Club. I’d like to ask you a few questions about your club.
First, I am interested <<< wrong tense - what tense deals with the past up until now?
in badminton for a long time but I don’t know how to play it. Do
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