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Task 2: In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you thing these changes are positive or negative.

The family structure has changed a lot of things such as number of children or some family roles. In my point of view, I believe these changes are both have positive and negative for some reason.

Nowadays, family living the modern life tend to have one or two children in each family. It is because living cost and some service are increase to high cost day by day in modern life so family have less children can safe their payment better.For example, people have to pay bills and manage family budget. Besides, family who have less children are can teach their children better compared to family have more than 2 children. It is because when they have less children, they can easily control their work also their children more good. It can be seen that it as a positive change in family structure today.

Moving on the drawbacks, family living in modern life nowadays are have some miss out emotional support. It is because people are have to do their work 8 hours per day. That is reason why they do not have time for family. From the financial point of view, a rise in demand for housing is likely to push up poverty prices and rents. It is can be seen that not only men go to work but also women have to go to work too because they are facing with rising living costs. There are seem like some negative changes in family structure.

In conclusion, In many recent years, some changes in family structure, as well as family roles. I believe that are have both positive and negative.