Please review my task 2 Ielts

Subject: Government should spend more money on railways rather than roads

To what extendt do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are lots of different types of transports in many countries. People now can easily choose trains instead of card or buses to travel long distance because of many benefits . That is why I believe that governments in many states should invest more money to erect rail transports rather than roads.

Firstly, trains have their own railroad tracks so commuters can avoid not only traffic congestion but also accidents which can easily be occurred one the roads. We all know that how tired we are when moving in early morning and late afternoon , and now thanks for train transports, we can use time more productively such as to study, read, watch landscape , talk with other passengers and even creat new relationships.

Furthermore, it can be denied that train is an ideal vehicle for people living further away their worplace or not having car. Many surveys show that cost living of central city is more than double the suburb. Therefore, many workers and students choose to rent an accommodation which is outside of the city to reduce their living expenses .

Finally, trains can transport a lot of merchandises with a reasonable price . In addition, goods can be delivered to recipients in good condition and short time. In contrast, if we delivery goods from one city to another, it can takes up to a month or more and the goods can be damaged .

To sum up, train trainsports are more convenient and quickly than other vehicles such as cars, motorbikes ..... which run on road. I agree that Leader of many countries currently should spend more money on building railway roads to improve citizens’s life.