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The line graph gives information about the amount of money expenditure on books in 4 countries, namely Germany, France, Italy and Austria from 1995 to 2005.
Overall, it is clear that there was an increase in how much money was spent on books in 4 nations, while the figures for Germany saw slight fluctuations, making it rank first in books expenditure over the 10-year period.
The amount of money spent on books in Germany started at exactly 80 million in 1995, after which it witnessed an increase to a mere 90% in 1999 before falling by 5% in 2003, which was followed by a rapid increase to peak at about 95% in 2005, but to a lesser extent, can be experienced in the figures for Austria, which increased significantly from exactly 30% in 1995 to just over 70% in 2005, though there were some slight shifts.
About 56% of the money was spent on books in France in 1995, with a subsequent rise to almost as high as the figures for Austria in 2005. The figures for Italy saw similar changes, increasing from a mere 50% to around 60% in 2005.
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