Please review my Task 1

(I have read your articles about words to avoid writing in Task 1. I hope my writing is somewhat improved compared to the previous. I was going the direction of pointing out the lowest and the highest marks. However, I cannot meet the 150 words requirement that way so I switch to writing the overall report instead.)

The line graph presents the number of passengers taking the London Underground Station in different time frames within one day. Overall, the station records 2 major peaks in the number of users during rush hours, 1 minor peak, and 2 lowest marks during an operating day.

The London Underground Station starts off with around 100 passengers at 6 AM - its first lowest mark. This number soon doubles at 7 AM and reach its first peak of about 400 people at 8 AM. After that, it starts to decline to under 200 persons before growing gradually to its minor peak of 300 customers at 2 o'clock in the afternoon.

After reaching its minor peak, the number of passengers at the London Underground Station begins to drop to its next lowest point of under 100 persons at 4 PM. Similar to the morning period, the station becomes busy again, recording the second highest peak of around 380 passengers at 6 PM, after which it begins to have fewer users toward the end of the day.