Please review my task 1

The line graph compares four different cafes, namely the Tea Room, Wi-fi Café, Internet Express, and Café Cool in terms of monthly income during the period of last year.

Overall, the income for four cafes showed some ups and downs from month to month, in particular, the majority of café incomes in winter were higher than those in hot months, with the exception of The Tea Room.

As regards the earnings for The Tea Room, starting at the highest point across four stores, 160 thousand in January, it was down during the period, falling steadily from 170 thousand in March to roughly 60 thousand in December, the lowest.

By contrast, the incomes of the three remaining cafes increased over the year, despite varying at different degrees. Earning 100 thousand dollars in January, Internet Express ranked the second position, despite dropping by 20 thousand in the next five months, but then bounced back to climb to approximately 136 thousand in December. There was a rise in Wi-fi Café sales over the first ten months, followed by a sudden increase to 180 thousand. Likewise, the trend for Café Cool was upward, tripling to 120 thousand higher than its initial income.

Thank you so much