PLEASE REVIEW MY SOP, any constructive feedback/suggestions in grammar, content, structure are welcome. Thank you very much in advance.
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Thank you so much for feedback AlpheccaStars, this is very helpful.
1. Yes, in terms of academics I have always maintained high GPA (3.8/4) and I was able to self fund my studies during 6 years of education through various scholarships as well as working as a part-time teacher. Therefore, I am not afraid of challenges, and can adjust to new country despite financial and social hardships. PhD is a long study, and so it will take lots of perseverance and resilience during that time. I am definitely someone who can withstand any hardships and find opportunities during challenging times.
AlpheccaStarsSomeone who will complement their current student body, adding diversity, novel experiences and ideas. This is hard to predict, because they may have a certain gap that they are looking to fill if they can, for example, a woman from the Scandinavia. Some are looking for teamworkers, some for individual contributors.
2. I have studied Sustainability Science which is a unique, multidisciplinary program in one of the best Universities in the world with the full scholarship. As an international student I have conducted research in Uzbekistan, considered as a developing country by contributing through novel research by implementing Sustainability concepts. As a female, and an eldest sister of 3 young women, I consider myself as a role model that would like to represent as Uzbek female community. I will be definitely brining diversity through my background and international experiences.
As one of the top universities in the world, they are looking for someone who can combine two different disciplines and conduct novel research with the help of two different disciplines ( e.g. : agro-economy). Their requirement is to have knowledge in those two disciplines, and contribute to sustainable development and sustainability. Also, actively represent the University in different conferences, symposiums and etc and be a role model on the campus.
AlpheccaStarsSomeone who, after completing the program, will enhance the reputation of the institution. This person has ambitions beyond the degree. Getting a PhD is only one step to their greater goals.
My goals after completing the PhD program at XX University is to apply forgery competitive program at XX International Organisation. One of the requirements is for the candidate to have a PhD degree. This opportunity will bring me closer toward my long term goals working in international development by contributing to sustainable development goals.
I have briefly drafted these points, I apologise before hand for any typos, grammar or context related mistakes. As always, I appreciate your further feedbacks and suggestions AlpheccaStars. This is such an immense support from your side, and I can't thank you enough.
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This example is about 450 words, only a third of the original. I have just excerpted the key ideas from your writing. My interest in the new field of sustainability, in particular, disaster resilience, took root when I was a junior reporter interviewing the people of *** Island, who had suffered the brunt of the 2011 tsunami.
- This example is about 450 words, only a third of the original.
- I have just excerpted the key ideas from your writing.
- My interest in the new field of sustainability, in particular, disaster resilience, took root when I was a junior reporter interviewing the people of *** Island, who had suffered the brunt of the 2011 tsunami.
- I felt compassion toward them, admiring their courage and determination to rebuild their lives.
- With global climate change, the world is facing more extreme storms and rising oceans, affecting many countries, so research in this field is essential to put into place the best governmental policies and investments in advance.
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This example is about 450 words, only a third of the original. I have just excerpted the key ideas from your writing.
My interest in the new field of sustainability, in particular, disaster resilience, took root when I was a junior reporter interviewing the people of *** Island, who had suffered the brunt of the 2011 tsunami. I felt compassion toward them, admiring their courage an
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