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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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Hello, I am writing an email to the General Manager of the hotel I worked before to request a referal for a survey as below. Would you please review it and give me some valuable input?
"I am wondering if it is possible for you to refer me to your friends in your industry network for this survey. Providing me an email address of those who are willing to participate in this survey or forwarding my invitation email to them is perfectly fine with me and highly appreciated.
Thank you so much again for your kind help and hope this solicitation would not be a burden to you."
"I am wondering if it is possible for you to refer me to your friends in your industry network for this survey. Providing me an email address of those who are willing to participate in this survey or forwarding my invitation email to them is perfectly fine with me and highly appreciated.
Thank you so much again for your kind help and hope this solicitation would not be a burden to you."
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There are some tiny mistakes in the last sentence:
Thank you so much again for your kind help and hope this solicitation would not be a burden to you."
Should be:
Thank you so much again for your kind help and I hope this solicitation isn't a burden to you."
Thank you so much again for your kind help and hope this solicitation would not be a burden to you."
Should be:
Thank you so much again for your kind help and I hope this solicitation isn't a burden to you."
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