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Bao Han Truong Posted 5 years ago
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TOPIC: What are the skills that a 21st century learner needs nowadays?In a world where everything is changing rapidly and there are too many distractions, people have to attain two indispensable skills as follows. Firstly, learners should be proficient in making use of the Internet. Nowadays Internet is becoming so familiar with people that hardly anything is shared on this platform. As a result, understanding the way it operates and knows how to benefit from it is very advantageous. Secondly, each learner has to acquire the skill of managing money.
The entertainment industry's quick development means there are an increasing number of sellers who wish others to pay for their products, in that case if people are incautious they might be tricked into their trap right away. Spending cash on unnecessary objects can ruin important plans and might well become a harmful habit if people cannot control themselves. To conclude, money management and the Internet are the two factors that need human's serious attention.
The entertainment industry's quick development means there are an increasing number of sellers who wish others to pay for their products, in that case if people are incautious they might be tricked into their trap right away. Spending cash on unnecessary objects can ruin important plans and might well become a harmful habit if people cannot control themselves. To conclude, money management and the Internet are the two factors that need human's serious attention.
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Bao Han Truong Please review my paragraph s . ) In a world where everything is changing rapidly and there are too many distractions, people have to attain two indispensable skills. as follows .
- Bao Han Truong Please review my paragraph s .
- ) In a world where everything is changing rapidly and there are too many distractions, people have to attain two indispensable skills.
- as follows .
- First, Firstly , (First = the first skill.
- ) ) learners should be proficient in making use of the Internet.
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Bao Han Truong Please review my paragraphs. (You wrote two, so you need to use the plural form.)
In a world where everything is changing rapidly and there are too many distractions, people have to attain two indispensable skills. as follows. First, Firstly
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