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2. Describe the most creative thing that you have done so far.
The most creative thing I've done is to come up with an idea to save the class's budget. My school has a traditional event that each class has to perform a short show to introduce the audience to that class's major. Unfortunately, while preparing for the play, we forgot to consider the money for the background settings. After a while, I suddenly came up with an idea to change the whole show from 'La belle et la bête' into a ballet. With a dark background and lights focus on the ballet dancers, the total cost almost halved since we only have to set up the music and hire a professional dancer to teach us. It wasn't easy to learn how to ballet dance in such a short time so we had made several mistakes. We didn't win the first prize though but we did get the fun after working together.
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The most creative thing I've done is to come up with an idea to save the class's budget . (This is not the correct word. ) My school has a traditional event where that each class has to perform a short show to introduce the audience to that class's major .
- The most creative thing I've done is to come up with an idea to save the class's budget .
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- ) My school has a traditional event where that each class has to perform a short show to introduce the audience to that class's major .
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- A major is a subject that a student chooses to specialize in.
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The most creative thing I've done is to come up with an idea to save the class's budget. (This is not the correct word. A budget is a list of categories that you are going to spend money on, and how much you are allocating to each category.) My school has a traditional event where that
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