Please review my paragraph

1. Present an argument to seek support from an international audience for a solution to a socioeconomic issue/topic that impacts your community.

I have always dreamt of becoming a doctor when I grow up-someone who can alleviate the pain and suffering of others and I believe that ABCuniversity will equip me with the education I need to fulfill my dream. Vinuniversity's curriculums are designed by Ivy League university, which will enhance my knowledge in Health Sciences and develop my teamwork skills. Additionally, becoming Vinuniversity student gives me the chance to practice with cutting edge technology that improves my practical skills better than the traditional way. As a ABCuniversity wannabe, I'm convinced that I can contribute to the university in many ways. First, by using my communication skills, I believe that I can connect people at the uni together and hopefully, I can set up a small group to practice our speaking skills at the university. Moreover, my wish to become a doctor has driven me to read lots of scientific research about ailments and symptoms of some diseases, therefore, I'm convinced I will thrive in the university's curriculums.

Thank you for reviewing my paragraph, however, I need it to be exactly 150 ( now it is 166 words ) , which sentence should I reduce?. Can you give me some comments on the paragraph, should there be some changes in the content?