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Kieungan Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Topic: Would you prefer to buy new things or repair old things ?

My essay:

There is a significant change in buying trends of people in some developing countries over the last few years. People tend to invest more on modern and new products to avail maximum benefits associated with them. In my perspective, I think that it is good to buy new things than to save what you have because the old things will give many drawbacks to you. I believe that old things break down easily after you use them for many years. It will cost a great deal of cash to repair them. Sometimes, the old things contain many complicated parts which are arduous to repair, and it is also the reason for customers to buy a new replacement. I reckon that new things will provide you more features than the old ones. The first reason might be that the new things are new, modern and smaller than the old ones. Moreover, many new things with more features which do not exist in the old ones. Your life will be easier with the state of the art products. The second reason might be that new things will not fall apart easily and the quality will be much better than previous ones. However, before you buy new things, I suggest that you should think of your budget. You should have a great attitude about spending your money; you should ask yourself whether it is worth throwing away your products and buy new replacements. There are many people have a bad habit of throwing their products while their things are still useful. Even though new things will improve your lives, but it is best to save whats many you have if it is still able to use. Plus, you can save your money as well. In conclusion, buying new things has many advantages but it depends on everyone to make their choices.

  
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