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Whom do you look up to most in life? Why?
I can list several people who I admire them. For instance, some of my teachers, my tutors and friends can be present in that list, but ones who I look up to most in life are my parents. Actually, they have so great and valuable efforts to make my lifestyle better. They tried to supply their children for their best, even when my parents themselves were in terrible trouble. I really respect this sacrificial manner. For example, my father used to work as principal of a guidance school, which many rich people of the city preferred it as their sons’ school. I know if he wants to make money any way like accepting some bribe’s offers he could make much money; but, he preferred to live in a fair manner. Therefore, I am proud of my parents and look up to them the most in my life.
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I can list several people who I admire them . (Wrong grammar. "who" is the object of "admire".
- I can list several people who I admire them .
- (Wrong grammar.
- "who" is the object of "admire".
- ) For instance, some of my teachers, my tutors and friends can be present in that list, but ones who I look up to most in life are my parents.
- Actually, they have made so many great and valuable efforts to make my life lifestyle better.
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I can list several people who I admire them. (Wrong grammar. "who" is the object of "admire". It is incorrect to have another object.) For instance, some of my teachers, my tutors and friends can be present in that list, but ones who I look up to most in life are my parents. Actually, they have mad
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