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One day when I woke up I felt very happy I wanted to do something fun with my family, but a didn't know that my parents had a surprise. I was ready to ask my parents if they wanted to play a game. My mom and dad told me that I should pack up and get ready to go. I was confused I thought to myself where we're going it is very early in the morning. Then my parents told me that we were going to Sea World I felt very excited I wanted to run to the car and get going, but first I needed to get ready.

I felt very excited when my parents told me that we were going to Sea World I wanted to leave the house quickly so we could get going. I wanted to go very fast to Sea World so I woke up my cousins Garret and Wyatt. I was very impatient once we were on our way I felt my heart beat faster as we got closer to Sea World. Once we were at the gate I wanted to jump out of the car and run to see the dolphins. I was extremely happy and also hungry.

When we were inside my cousin and I agreed to go on the electric ell the tallest ride in Sea World once we were on the ride I felt amazed at how tall the ride was it felt awesome. Then we went to the food court it had different kinds of smell there were fried chicken, barbecue, and much more we ate hot dogs and hamburgers with lots of fries it tasted so good I could feel the crunchiness of the fries. My parents wanted to see the shows so we went to the show it was amazing I was so happy and excited. At the show, there was lots of laughter and claps it was amazing. I was so happy I also wanted to see the sharks it was cool and amazing.

It was getting late so we decided to go and rest a bit we sat down and rest the sunset was beautiful. I felt very happy and tired because I was walking around the theme park all day there was music, people were dancing, and lots of children laughing it was wonderful. Then we went to the car and we drove home I was talking with my cousins about what ride did they like more it was fun my favorite ride was Manta it was very fast and fun. I hope to visit Sea World again because we bought annual passes. I was very happy I had a fun adventure.

I had so much fun I wanted to go back to Sea World again. It was fun I saw all kinds of animals it was a great experience. I think that it is the best theme park ever because it is very fun and you learn many things about animals. It is very nice how Sea World uses all the generated money to rescue and help animals that are hurt. I will visit Sea World again because it is awesome and very fun I hope to go back soon to Sea World.