Please, Review My Motivation Letter!??

I am writing regarding your EVS (European Voluntary Service) project. First of all, I would like to introduce myself and describe why I would like to participate in your European Voluntary Service project?.? My name is Eunji Kim. I am 23 years old. I graduated from the fashion design department at the vocational high school in 2012 and completed the vocational school of higher education in the same department in 2014. Also? graduated from the Faculty of Economics and International Relations this year, in France?. At the moment, I am still working for a textile company as a designer. I am a very dynamic person, ?creative,? independent, and open-minded to new ideas, with a curious character ready to learn. My biggest weakness is public speaking since it makes me a little nervous. But since I would like to improve myself and I am not afraid of a challenge, I look forward to a new experience. ?

I would love the opportunity to volunteer for an EVS project, at first sight. I immediately knew I wanted to be a part of it. I think that to participate in social work, in a project like this, is the best way to do something that really fits me. I feel the need to grow as a person, enriching my culture, language and learning from people are working. Moreover, the opportunity for an EVS project in Europe will provide me with a huge opportunity of having international exposure and getting a multicultural perspective.??

Concerning my work experience, I have participated in various volunteer activities in high schoolsuch as entertaining children in foundling hospital and taught them different abilities and knowledge.? I sewed clothes for people who in need and reached to them.? Apart from this,? when I start to study at university, I moved another city I had to learn how to live together with other persons that I did not know before.? I organized art events. Also, I working by the local youth service of my town to entertain while having fun.

I have never been in Macedonia, but I would like to know it very much. Working for your organization in this country would be fantastic. Designing a new thing and sewing was my favorite hobby back then and it became my job now. I am doing my job really happily, and I hope a can help you with my skills.?? I am very interested in your history, the beautiful historical places. I would love to know Kocani?, Ohri, Skopje? and the other beautiful cities in there.

I am sure I will be able to adjust to your project and be able to work easily in a multi-cultural environment. I am ready to learn and I would be very grateful if you would give me a chance to contribute to this project. Thank you for your time reading this letter and I hope for a positive response. If you have any queries, please contact me via e-mail. I look forward to your reply??.

Kind Regards