Please review my motivation letter..

Hello everybody,
I'm trying to writing a letter of motivation for application in B.sc program in university
Please correct my faults and give me some advices about the structure of the letter, thank you so much...

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Name
Address
City, Country
Tel: +000 (0) 000.00.00.00
Email:

6th June 2015

Name
title
University
Street
City, state, zip

Dear Mr./Ms._________:

I am writing to you today in order to apply to the B.Sc program in Computer Science at ###### University.

I have always been curious about innovative technologies and the secrets behind it. In my childhood I was always working in computer discovering new things and developing my computer skills, and afterwards by piecemeal I started learning new languages such as Php and Java from online courses and creating micro programs under the guidance of my grand brother who is an IT manager in a private company.

Since 2011 I am an active member in a charitable foundation interested in childhood and youth where I developed my leadership abilities and the spirit of teamwork and sense of responsibility.

Studying at ###### University is a perfect choice for me to show my talents and strengthen my skills in great environment of innovation and creativity, among high quality of education and clubs activities which will give me the chance learn more about different cultures and make acquaintance with students from different countries.

Due to my financial situation, since I am not in a position to finance my studies I will be very grateful to be provided with scholarship to improve my education and incent my career prospects.

I hope that you will look at my application favorably, and I look forward to hearing further from you.

Best regards,
#Name#
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