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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Please review my motivation letter

Dear all,
I'm writing a Motivation Letter for Phd studies in one of the Univesities in XXXX and I would really appreciate your help. I know this forum is very useful. I wrote something but is still as draft.
I`m waiting for your response.
Thank you in advance,

First of all, I would like to express my great interest to attend the Ph.D Scholarship position ` XXXX ` at the Departament XXXX, Technical University of Denmark.

Even years ago , before I started my studies in General Chemistry, I have not been accepted things just like they are, example that is the X thing and that is another Y thing. I have always been curios on: What is it about? What is it made from? How can I make it?

While I was following the last year of my Bachelor studies, I observed the master thesis work of some other students and collaborated with them, until the end of their work.

My master thesis mentored by Prof . Dr. XX and Prof . Dr. XX was titled `XX `, Faculty of Natyral Science, XX . For the first time CO2 under critical conditions was applied to determine the possibility of using CO2 to fractionate components of the interest present in these extracts.

I have always been really interested in case which have the extraordinary impact on the health and everyday life; being the important issue it draws the researcher attention.

What made me delighted? I think that success tend on about hard-working, time management and being devoted. It was really a good feeling to see the wonder in my professors eyes and how they were amazed during my thesis presentation. To better explain the extraction process I also prepared-used a video animation.

After I have finished my studies, I have worked in some different new companies. I was lucky working in these new companies. This gave me the opportunity to reveal my abilities in the management and creating the departments. For instance: management of the laboratory and the implementation of the ISO standards 17025 & 9001.

I really find myself professionally and personally in these experience because, it is interesting to exchange our vision about the future. But the most important is that I think the nano structures reveal the way to the perfection.

Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely yours
  
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