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Purple teal 183 Posted 5 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please review my letter for IELTS

A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country, you have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him or her
write a letter to the friend. In your letter
Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
say why you think the job would be suitable for him or her
Explain how to apply for the job


Dear Anthony,

I hope you are doing well. I remember you asked me to find job openings for a Lead Software Developer in my country and guess what, I have a cheerful news for you.

After checking for job vacancies on my company job portal, I came across one exciting job opening with my company’s Sydney office. I have gone through all the job details and I think you are a perfect fit for the job.

The role expects a person to have an extensive experience in the technology, which you are working in. Also, the person should be good with data analytics and database management. All in all, I think this job opening will suit your knowledge and experience.

I would suggest you to send me your updated CV without any delay and I will upload it on my company’s job portal. The management will then contact you for the further procedure.

At any rate, I am thrilled of imagining us working together for the same company. Do send me all the required information as soon as you can.

Best regards,

Gauri

  

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Dear Anthony, I hope you are doing well. I remember Do you remember that you asked me to find job openings for a Lead Software Developer in my country ? and G uess what, I have a cheerful some wonderful news for you.

  • Dear Anthony, I hope you are doing well.
  • I remember Do you remember that you asked me to find job openings for a Lead Software Developer in my country ?
  • and G uess what, I have a cheerful some wonderful news for you.
  • (It is very unnatural for the writer to remember something that they have news about!
  • ) After checking for job vacancies on my company 's job portal, I came across one exciting job opening with my company’s Sydney office where I am working.
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Dear Anthony,

I hope you are doing well. I remember Do you remember that you asked me to find job openings for a Lead Software Developer in my country? and Guess what, I have a cheerful some wonderful news for

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