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The given table gives data on the number of orders of four different foods and drinks in a coffee shop within a week.
It can be seen that coffee and pastries are used the most from 7:30 to 10:30. Additionally, sandwiches are the food that is ordered the most in lunch time.
From 7:30 to 10:30, there are 265 cups of coffee and 275 pastries are consumed, respectively. 110 are the quantity of tea orders, which is higher than the figure for sandwiches, standing at 50. From 10:30-2:30, sandwiches are the most favorite food in this coffee shop, with 200 units used.
The time from 2:30-5:30p.m, customers tend to use coffee and pastries when coming to the shop. The number of tables made is 145 with coffee and 150 with pastries. At dinner time from 5:30-8:30pm, tea and pastries are ordered the least, standing at 75 and 80, respectively. Meanwhile, coffee is still the most favorite drinks at this time, at 200 cups used.
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The description is incorrect. It should be: The table below shows sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. The given table gives data on the number of orders of four different foods and drinks in a coffee shop within a week.
- The description is incorrect.
- It should be: The table below shows sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.
- The given table gives data on the number of orders of four different foods and drinks in a coffee shop within a week.
- (incorrect) It can be seen that C offee and pastries are used (wrong word) the most from 7:30 to 10:30.
- Additionally, sandwiches are the food item that is ordered the most in lunch time.
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The description is incorrect. It should be:
The table below shows sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.
The given table gives data on the number of orders of four different foods and drinks in a coffee shop within a week. (incorrect)
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