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Kiên đoàn Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please review my ielts writting task 1...my target is 6.0 writting...i need help!!
this is my answer...looking for your help and can sbd score my answer? i hope it will reach band 5.0
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You have uploaded an image of your writing. I cannot comment on it directly because I cannot edit it. There are many mistakes.
- You have uploaded an image of your writing.
- I cannot comment on it directly because I cannot edit it.
- There are many mistakes.
- In particular, unnatural English usage, incorrect word choices, spelling errors and grammatical errors.
- In spite of all the problems, I can get the general gist of your essay.
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You have uploaded an image of your writing. I cannot comment on it directly because I cannot edit it.
There are many mistakes. In particular, unnatural English usage, incorrect word choices, spelling errors and grammatical errors.
In spite of all the problems, I can get the general gist of your essay. It might qualify for a band 5, but that is optimistic.
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