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Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the World, particularly in their contribution to global warming.

Why is global warming a problem?

What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

Global warming is a controversial nowadays. Many firmly believe that developed nations are the greatest contribution to this phenomenon, because of the fierce operation of factories there. In this essay, I will clarify this problem and give some solutions to this phenomenon.

It is true that the development of any nations has some obviously harmful effects on the global climate. First, due to the fiercely competitive climate in these nations, a lot of enterprises and factories appear every day, followed by hundreds of tons of gas emission released to the atmosphere each day, which contributes greatly to the global warming and negatively determine people’s health. Moreover, the higher people’ living standard is the greater demand for natural resources they have. Research has shown that in these highly industrialized nations, the use of fossil fuels of people is three times as much as others, bringing about the prejudicial effects on the global warming.

Governments play undeniably important roles in tackling this issues. In order to minimize the pollution in the air, governments can restrict the amount of carbon dioxide released by factories each day, which might help improve the serious situation now. Also, the environmental field is important, so governments should invest more money in this with the aim of ensuring the waste treatment of manufacturing. Additionally, individuals also play an essential role in reducing the greenhouse effects. People can run campaigns to stop deforestation and encourage people to plant more trees, which helps dramatically reducing carbon dioxide.

To sum up, because the global warming is threatening people’s lives as well as animals, both governments and individuals need to aggravate the serious results it brings about.