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TOPIC: Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why it is not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?

In modern life, there are numerous of transportation appeared that bring for citizens more choices in moving. Due to the development of transport, bicycles are no longer to be considered and replaced by motorbikes, cars, buses,… There is no denying the fact that many various reasons are formed to explain for not using cycling. So, it is very important to carry out some effective solutions to expand the advantages of using bicycles.

Biking a recycle brings some disadvantages and that is the reasons why they become uncommon to use. The first reason is other transportation like motorbikes, cars and public transports are faster than biking. In this day and age, people are busier with their works, so they need to have a vehicle that makes them commute quickly and conveniently. Instead of consuming considerable time to use bicycles, they can easily go to work by buses with a small fare or their own motorbikes. Secondly, cycling is more physically demanding than riding a motorbike or driving a car. For example, when the weather is scorching hot and stuffy, moving by bicycle is certainly difficult. Thus, people will not choose this method whereas they can enjoy in a car with good-condition like air-conditional, music,…

There are several solutions should be applied to tackle these problems. The government plays a vital role in raising citizens’ awareness about cycling by expanding the bicycle lanes. For instance, in Netherland, the government paved the way for bicyclists, which encourages peoples to commute daily by this transport more popular. Moreover, the local administration should organize some competitions using bicycles to protect the environment. It not only makes competitors motivate to cycle more often but also preserves the environment.

In conclusion, although there are many problems related to bicycles, a number of effective measures are adopted to increase the common use of cycling.