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Topic: The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australian males and females in five age brackets who took part in physical activity on a regular basis in 2010. Overall, women are more physically active than men in almost all age groups, except for those aged 15-24.

Looking into details, only in the youngest age category did men take regular exercise more than women, with 52,8% and 47,7% respectively. However, between the ages of 25 and 44, women worked out more regularly than their male counterparts, ranging from 48,9% to 42,5%. The 35-44 age group shows the lowest percentage of men doing physical activity, accounting for only 39,5%.

Turning to the remaining groups, women aged 45 to 64 were the most active, with around 53% engaged in physical workouts. In contrast, men of the same group exercised much less, about 8% lower. Also, the percentage of males and females over 65 who do physical activity was roughly the same, at around 47%.