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Tile walk 976 Posted 9 years ago
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Please review my ielts writing task 1. Thank you!!!

The chart below shows number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of education. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparision where relevant

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The bar chart illustrates the figures for girls out of 100 boys join different kind of school education in 2 years 1990 and 1998.

Overall, the number of girls per 100 boys fluctuated during the period shown. In addition, the figure for girls in developed countries is higher than developing countries for almost all time surveyed.

In 1990, among developing countries, primary education accounted for highest number, at around 80 girls student. The figure for secondary and tertiary were lower, at about 80 and 70 respectively, a remarkable gap of 10. However, in developed countries group, female student who join tertiary school

  

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The bar chart illustrates the figures for girls out of 100 boys (You have some words missing) join (The sentence already has the verb "illustrates". Adding another verb is ungrammatical.) different kind (Only one kind?) of school education in 2 years 1990 and 1998.

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