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Topic: The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of female unemployment in each country of the United King Dom from 2013 to 2014

Overall, it is true that the female unemployment rates decreased slightly from 2013 to 2014, excepted in Scotland.

In 2013, the female unemployment accounted for 5.6% in Northern Ireland. The only nation has less percentage of women jobless was Wales, which was 5.4%. Both nations saw a decrease in the unemployment rates for women in 2014. In Northern Ireland, the rate dropped to 4.6 % and 5% in Wales, respectively.

6.8% of English women was the highest number of female joblessness in 2013. However, this number fell 0.3 % in 2014. After all, Scotland was the only nation has an increasing percentage of female unemployment. In 2013, there was 6.1% of Scotish jobless women percentage. In 2014, it increased to 6.7%, which made Scotland became the country with the highest women in four coutries.