Please Review My IELTS Writing Task 1

TASK 1: The plan below shows a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps illustrated the various changes of Grange Park from its in 1920 to the present.

It is clear that these changes have taken place for almost all parts located in the park such as a play area and café have been added over the given period.

Mid of the park, the fountain was removed and made room for a rose garden with some surrounding seats. On the west side of this, a mix of a stage for musicians with the rose garden opposite to the South, some of the surrounding seating has been converted into the Amphitheatre for concerts. To the southeast of the park, the Glasshouse and seating have been transformed into a Water feature and the new entrance for an underground car park which constructed next to the Water feature.

On the opposite of this, the rose garden and the Pond for water plants were removed and made by the café and the Children’s play area.