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Arts should receive money from government and companies because
-Arts bring people the joy that the need in every life to confront with hard life
-Arts are reflections of culture and traditions, therefor, funding arts can help promote tourism and boost the economy for countries that heavily relies on the industry.
It is better to invest in scientific projects because
-If the money is invested in scientific projects, people's standard of living will be drastically improved.
-It can also be used to fund researches in medicine, saves millions of lives
-Invest in scientific projects for environmental problems such as creating substitutional material for plastic or work on the replacement of fossil fuel.
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OK, now turn these into two body paragraphs.
- OK, now turn these into two body paragraphs.
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