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Quang Huy Nguyễn Posted 4 years ago
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Please review my IELTS task1 essay

the chart illustrates how much men and women working in different jobs were paid averagely on a weekly basis in 2015

Overall, Professionals had by far the highest wages for both men and women in all categories, while male and female Manual laborers received to least in the survey. In addition, similarites can be seen in all sector which show that men are paid more generously than women

Regarding Professionals, $2000 was earned by men every week, compared to $1900 received by women. As for Manual laborers, the wages of men exeeded that of women, with respective figure being $1000 and $850.

Dramatic differences are not seen in the salaries of Service worker and Administrative or Clerical workers, with the wages of men $350 higher than that of women. Additionally, $1400 was paid to male Technicians in comparison to $900 get by the counterparts.

  

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