Please Review My IELTS task 2 Essay about Families with employed parents.

These days, a large number of families live in a situation which forces both parents to work. This matter could lead to some problems like lack of time being with family. In this essay, some problems related to this will be mentioned and a number of solutions for it will be given.

The most important problem that is common in families which both parents work is that family members do not spend enough time with each other. This problem has some bad sequences. First, the father and mother do not have enough time for the relationship between themselves and also for speaking about the other family members’ problems. Second, children in such a family can not be with their father and mother so much and ask them for their problems. This maybe has some very bad effect on their lives like moral or educational problems. For instance, you can find manys students who experienced academic failure when both parents found jobs. Finally, a family with employed parents might miss many opportunities to enjoy like cooking and eating good quality foods in most meals, caring plants in the house very well, and keeping a pet.

There are some solutions for families which both parents need to have a job. First, they can lower their expectations in life and so reduce their costs in life. For example, family members can travel in the city using public transportation like the underground, bus, and taxi instead of having a private car. Second, if one of the parents try to find a better job with higher income, the other one will be able to leave their job. Finally At least, one of the parents should try to find in-house jobs like network marketing, keyboarding or typing, and online businesses. In this way, they have more time being in close relation with children.

In conclusion, although there are some difficulties for families which both parents work like having little time for being with each other, they can overcome these trouble situation with some solutions like reducing the costs of the life, finding a better job by one of the parents or doing home jobs by father or mother.