Please Review My IELTS task 2 Essay .

Write an essay on the following topic.

Some believe that those who are born with a silvers spoon in the mouth become better members of society and make more contributions to it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Write at least 250 words.

The family that each baby was born into will obviously have effects on the role which they will play in society. It is supposed by some people that a person who is born in a wealthy family will be a better member of the society in the future and they will be able to contribute more than one who is born in a low or middle-class family. I totally agree with that for some reasons.

It is possible that being born into a rich family has some disadvantages. On one hand, when a baby is born in a high-level family it is not necessary to do many jobs. So, they will have probably a dependent character. On the other hand, a person born in a middle-level family will have the chance to be a self-made member of society. But the important point is such a person have missed many chances in their life when he becomes an adult because of having not much money.

If a member of the society wants o add a value to it, their mind should be free of thinking to some questions like, “how should I earn money?” If a man wants to help poor people in the society, the first, essential and maybe the most important step is that he should not be one of them. Also, having much money since he born makes him able to do many jobs and have different experiences in an easier and quicker way compared with the other one who missed this chance because of the lack of money. It helps the rich guy achieve more findings which may help the society. For instance, Thomas Edison, who is one of the greatest inventors all around the world invented many things using his money and who doesn’t know that he added a very great value to his society.

In conclusion, being born with a silver spoon in the mouth increases the chance of being a better and more effective member of society and making a significant contribution to different parts of it.